Julia Michaels Makes her choice
Jenna Lotti, Dan Burke, Keegan Bost will advance to the producer sessions. Jeremy Shayne is eliminated. Julia thinks the song needs too many changes. Later, she admits that she feels the song was "too familiar." Interesting, because she said in the room that the song would only need small changes. Keegan on the other hand, is through even though the group agreed that the entire lyric would need a rewrite.
Producer sessions
Ester Dean produces "Numb" with Dan Burke – Ester thinks the song needs to breathe. It's bouncy, but the lyrics are sad. She wants to make it simple, refine the lyrics, add a drop.. Dan and Ester work together on the lyrics. Julia is such a gifted songwriter, says Ester, that the goal is to make the song a proper starting point for her.
Shane McAnally produces "Sad Girls" with Jenna Lotti – Julia related to Jenna's story, so Shane wants to transform it into a rousing anthem. He changes the lyrics to make it more "Julia Michaels." Shane hates starting a song with the chorus. Hooks should be saved as a payoff, he says.
Ryan Tedder produces Glad You Came with Keegan Bost – Ryan gets to work on overhauling the lyrics. "You have to trust the process," he says. Ryan plays some chords for Keegan. He's doing all the heavy lifting here, as Keegan is the greenest of all the songwriters.
The Artists present their newly produced songs
Jenna Lotti – Sad Girls – The lyrics still strike me as trite and sophomoric. Shane actually added the line "This is my party and I'm going to cry if I want to." Hm. The chorus is the best part of the song.
Dan Burke – Numb – A new arrangement is a big improvement. The changes Ester and Dan employ make the song more coherent and hooky. Ester suggested adding a drop after "I hate that I'm so numb" and it works beautifully.
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